Story: Scott A. Bachmann | Art: Scott D.M. Simmons
A little over a day late on this page, day jobs have been rough for both of us, but the page is worth the wait!
ORIGINAL SCRIPT
Panel 1
LEON is about to enter the noisy room. He’s carrying a piano lesson book.
GENERAL VOICES
Did not. Did too. That’s crazy.
Panel 2
LEON enters. They all fall silent. This unnerves LEON.
LEON
Just passing through ladies. Don’t mind me.
Panel 3
LEON has left. LiBERTY breaks the silence.
LIBERTY
I’d retire from crime fighting too if I had that to come home to. Mmm hmm.
Panel 4
They are all laughing.
Panel 5
LIZA is a bit serious.
LIZA
We’ve been over this. I’ve done my time. Ten years I was on the Defense Force. I helped a lot of people.
GWEN
You saved the world.
JOLT
Couple of times.
LIZA
And I loved running with you gals, but now my family needs me. I still help out on occasion, but I’m retired. This is who I am now.





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